Maybe add some sounds and general stupidity of the character like; He heard an eery noise come from the cabin but was too tired to think anything of it and continued towards the cabin.
Spirt bear, it actually kinda good, I never read
Mercutio has ill-will towards both of them
Im assuming you have read the book already that its talking about. So what you need to do in the second part is describe how the item affected the character. Like cause and effect. How did the rash effect him? After you do that make sure you say where you got the evidence from. Then the 3rd step explains itself. Write a paragraph on how the items affect their perspective. Hopefully this helps guide you because I dont have the time to read the full book. Just follow those guidelines
