Answer:
C. A score of two is best because, although the writing stays on task, there are some errors in spelling and grammar
Explanation:
So, two basic criteria for giving the score to this essay are focus on the task and spelling and grammar errors.
This is supposed to be a persuasive essay; it needs to convince the mayor in the need for a park. The author states the current situation, emphasizes the dangers of playing in the street, provides some expert evidence which suggest benefits of having a park and proposes a possible solution for the situation. Considering this, it's fair to say that the author stayed foccused to the task.
However, there are some errors found throughout the passage (they need to does instead of they need to do, he closest instead of the closest, les instead of less etc.)
With this in mind, it would be the most adequate to give this essay a score of two.
Answer:
1.A 2. A OR C
Explanation:
1. it says that the sun is shining with all <em>HIS</em> might
2. i don't really know this one
Answer:
The correct answer is <u>A</u>: Chelsea felt tired during the race because she grew warm from the sun.
Explanation:
Chelsea didn't run faster or further than Brian did. In fact, Brian was faster and he ran further than Chelsea, but he suddenly fell and injured his knee. However, she decided to stop down and help him stand.
At the beginning of the excerpt, the author describes the race and says the sun was warm, so she soon grew tired because of the sun, but she decided not to quit the race.
