All persons, yes all persons
Can you hear me beyond all those commotions
Held as slaves within any State, yes held captive
Must be given the right to freely live.
This freedom, oh for so long has been deprived
Will make such persons finally be revived
Let no one hinder, no one repress
Such people of their liberty possess.
But you, oh people now set free
Must all violence never agree
Let labor be your source of gladness now
Cause your wage you’ll receive, I vow.
As freed men you shall be 
Serving fellowmen and country see
Freely you receive so freely give
Freedom that you long to have, enjoy and live.
        
             
        
        
        
Hi,
No, that is not the correct way to write the sentence. The sentence contains grammatical issues. 
I believe, the correct sentence structure is:
Charlie was mildly amused at how careful Jared was with his appearance; it just wasn't Charlie's way.
But, in another perspective, no change could also be correct.
Faith xoxo
 
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
B, E, F, G
Explanation:
Subscetable is an incorrect spelling, the correct spelling is susceptible, and it means being open to or easily influenced by a thing.
Property in this context is incorrect, the correct word here is 'properly' which can be interpreted as 'in right manner'.
Can't is an abbreviation for cannot, and in a formal writing it is best to use the full form of a word rather than the abbreviation, therefore i would use the word 'cannot' in place of can't.
Unbeneficial is a controversial word yet to well incorporated in the vocabulary, it raises a question in the sentence. I would replace it with 'disadvantageous, unhelpful or unprofitable', because these words will be better understood in this context. 
 
        
             
        
        
        
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Answer:
It could be about anything, a time where someone mistreated you. I'll give you an idea to start off then let your writing take over because of plagarism. 
Explanation:
Ideas:
- Physical Abuse from a bully (right along with emotional and mental abuse)
- Name calling
- Cyber Bully, (bullying over socials & stuff) 
- Picking on people that vulnerable, or jealous of.