Wooww...your poem is amazing...
The only idea I can suggest is to use more sophisticated vocabulary to express your thoughts and feelings and maybe a range of punctuation.
Wouldst thou have that/ Which thou esteem'st the ornament of life,/ and live a coward in thine own esteem {Apex Answer}
<span>I believe the technique in question is "excessive pride in ones self" or the term know as Conceit.
Hope this helps.</span>
Answer:
He feels terrible about it.
