The story "Spunk" begins with Walter Thomas and Elijah Mosley, the men on the porch of the store. They witness Lena Kanty wondering off into the bushes with a man that is not her husband, Spunk. As they talk about Spunk and his bravery, Joe (Lena's husband) walks into the store. Joe is highly timid compared to Spunk, and he is mocked for being cuckolded by his wife. Elijah then advises Joe that they saw his wife and Spunk together, causing Joe to go after them with a knife.
The men appear to entertain each other with gossip, and instigating conflict between people. They most likely have nothing more interesting to do.
OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
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<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
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Answer: The combined use of media, such as movies, music, lighting, and the internet, as for education, entertainment, or advertising. adj. 1. Of or relating to the combined use of several media: a multimedia installation at the art gallery.
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Active
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Active voice is generally prefered to passive in print and always preferred writing.
