The selection that contains a fragment is B.
Every other sentence contains two distinct clauses put together by the use of a relative pronoun (which in A and C) or a conjunction (so in phrase D). In B, the two clauses "she doesn't give herself enough credit" and "that's too bad" are not linked syntactically and are simply juxtaposed.
Although not grammatically "correct", the use of a fragmented syntax a frequent trait of oral speech.
I think irving did a great job in creating suspense for that story.
I remember clearly the part when the character felt an eerie gazed in his bedroom and keep hearing unrecognized moan. That part is well written and will send chills to most of its reader's spine
The life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent in many different areas. How can this thesis statement be improved?
D. The life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent studying, attending class, and socializing with peers.
“Young people are not lost! They are not going to school for a reason, so they won’t get sick.There could be better ways for people to solve this! There’s no reason for them to go back to school if it’s not safe for them to go.If they go to school get sick go home get there family sick that effects everybody!”
I just made this umm and I tried