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I would change the sentence “ through out middle school years ive always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged “
I would change that to this “ Throughout my middle school years experienced depression and anxiety. Also in my years of middle school I was unfairly judged . I had always been called “mean”or “stuck” up by my class mates and fellow students because of the way I talk to people. This would always cause me to overthink and lead to me becoming more nervous hearing about the way people really think of me . I was also judged because of the way I looked such as the facial expressions that I use .

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