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c.yes, this is a brief aside that can go inside parenthesis
It's a woman! The main character tells her story of undergoing depression and how her husband doesn't believe her. I'd suggest you giving the story a quick read :)
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Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
Can you put the whole question and I’ll help you