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When the school year ended, Shane, Austin, and I went straight to the beach and threw an "end-of-the-year party." It was, pretty crazy honestly. After the party, we all went to Austin’s house and continued it there since the police had said we couldn’t drink at the beach. The party DJ, Omar, was blasting music. The party didn’t end until the morning. Since Austin’s parents were out for the week, we had his house to ourselves. So, after the last party ended, we cleaned up and got the house ready for tonight’s party. It was a difficult task but we managed to complete it before 10 PM. This time, the party was even crazier than the last one. There were drinks, food, music, a pool bar, and the best part is that the music was blasting. Around 2:30 in the morning, the police showed up, started to detain everybody. Some people ran out of the house but some weren’t so lucky. Apparently, Shane jumped out of the window and ran into the avenue a little further behind Austin’s backyard. We were amazed when we heard how lucky Shane had been. He was the only one of us who got lucky, though. My parents had to pick up Austin and me and I was grounded for the rest of the summer. Austin’s parents didn’t ground him for too long, his only punishment was to clean the house. I’m pretty sure none of us regretted throwing the parties."
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249 words, no grammatical mistakes, and a 92 on the Grammarly scale.
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Parts of the passage that shows that Nate and his family played a role in the American independence are highlighted below
(1) "Somewhere beyond these stingy New Hampshire fields, his brother Eben was marching gloriously with his regiment, defending the colonies against the British", This part shows that Nate's brother is part of the military
(2) Nate's father also mentioned that “Your cousin Abe has joined the militia—guess they fnally thought he was old enough
to be of use" which shows also that Nate's family plays a role in the war.
(3) Also Nate family also helped to feed a troop with potato, water and also provided them with shelter for the night according to the passage.
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