I lay in the soft green grass, watching the wind shake the delicate petals around me.
For every brief moment i think I want to stay here forever and never flee.
I’m taken back by the quiet trickles of water i here flowing in the stream.
I watch a brittle leaf fall into the damp bliss letting the stream take it on its course
At this moment I feel no remorse,
Because maybe the key to life is embracing what comes your way even if it’s at full force.
<span> The comment on a peer’s research essay that clearly addresses problems with supporting evidence is D. The reason you discuss in paragraph 2 does not seem to fit with you claim. This comment is very important for giving correct reason that would fit with a claim has direct impact to the research paper. Therefore, this problem should be properly address to make the research valuable.</span>
