Well i don’t know the paragraph but here’s some figurative language you can look for.
simile: The clock goes as fast as a mouse.
metaphor: That clock really is my enemy.
Personification: The clocking keeps running.
Onomatopoeia: Tick, tock, tick, tock...
Alliteration: The clock's clicking creates crazy compact catastrophes in my head!
Hi, I’m Lena and I will be answering your question to the best of my ability. If you have any further questions after my answer, do not hesitate to ask me! ツ
♡ Let’s look at the main important things that will lead you in the correct path.
♥ Keep in mind that you don't have to write word-by-word in the passage. You can phrase it in your own way and own style!
♥ Imagine yourself in the person's shoes. It should give you a better idea of all the sensory details!
♡ Now, let's solve!
♥ What can you see?
-The apple
-The caramel
-Your white sleeve
♥ What can you hear?
-Scrunch!
-The sound of you chewing
-Detaching the bite of your apple
♥ What can you smell?
-The apple
-The caramel
-The drool (Yes, you can sometimes smell your own drool.)
♥ What can you touch?
-The apple
-The caramel sticking to your chin
-Your white sleeve
♥ What can you taste?
-The tartiness of the apple!
-The delicious sticky caramel
-Your drool
And as for the question at the bottom (it did not go unnoticed!), you should get some practice and try to figure that out yourself! Now that you have an idea of sensory details, you should be doing swell on your own. Have a marvelous day!
