Question

Art was made for entertainment for a person, and now it has grown into many cultures. The information of why it was created can be based off of a person’s opinion or based on facts, while we talk about that the information will be given about who created art who started this whole colorful creation. does this look like a good start to my thesis statement?

Answer 1

That dose look good. I would take out from "...or based on facts". Art is mainly based off of opinion. I would say that "Art and what it has done has changes the world greatly."

Hopes this helps.