Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer: Some values important to people in the new nation were individualism, to be respected, and self reliance. They had no care in the world for people that didn't have these character aspects. Resources Brainly.com, Vintageamericanways.com, and coursehero.com helped me understand that people that weren't respected would not be listened to. They also wanted them to not have too many friends, and to rely on themselves for answers they needed. They found their information from researching instead of asking, so that their answers were always correct. Not rumors.
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Answer:
"The Men Behind the Myth: Tracking the Voyage of the Argo"
Explanation:
The answer is A because unlike the other articles, this one talks about the people other than Jason that helped Jason find the Golden Fleece.
Bungle means to mess up. sometimes used with people who have butterfingers (slippery fingers, drop lots of stuff)
a sentence
'Don't bungle it up this time.'
