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jekas [21]
3 years ago
9

Is this a good start to a story? Please I need comments on my work!

English
2 answers:
alina1380 [7]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

Yes, I love it

Explanation:

photoshop1234 [79]3 years ago
4 0

It seems good, I would totally read this! What I would change would be the repetition in the start of the sentence and the "OH YEAH" part to lowercase. If I was able to change this, I would need to copy and paste, but yeah. I'd say it's a good story starter!

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