I think you should use a tone that sounds very interested and very keen to know. Also, it should sound very 'socialised' and feisty voice.
Hope this helps :)
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this is a little hard but it seems to me that you have a wrong answer in number 2 you put ap over extremely but it should be over bird other than that you are good there is probably 1 or 2 mistakes so just go back over it i do not see anymore mistakes.
