Yes it is perfectly acceptable:)
Answer:
to show children what happens when they misbehave
Explanation:
Have a nice day
The other factor is location/place
Well it depends on what you are doing but I think you should do visual.
Answer:
Reread the whole essay. Fix any run ones make sure everything is capitalized if needed make sure they essay makes sense. Also make sure the essay has a thesis statements, topic sentences, a hook, and make sure it has supported evidence. Hope this helped :)
