How could a change in emphasis BEST develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?
A) The author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff.
B) The author could shorten details about McKee's preparations and give more details about the rocket flight and the adventures that took place during colonization of Saturn.
C) The author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with plenty of intricate technical detail.
D) The author could focus the story solely on McKee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.
Answer:
The correct option is:
The instructor is trying to put a positive spin on an unfortunate situation
Explanation:
When the author's mother took her to a beauty training school in the Mission district, she put her in the hands of a student who didn't know how to cut hair, who couldn't even hold scissors without shaking his hand. The author wanted to get big curls, but ended up having a mess of uneven short hair. Then the instructor comes up then and tried his best to make the hair even. In the end, her hair was cut so short that it looked like a boys head. Then the instructor says this words to put a positive spin and to make the author feel better
