Pacing is moving a story forward with a certain speed. So the correct answer should be slow. To slow a scene to the point of using a coma, add a lot of these. Since all of the sentences are relatively long with a lot of commas and all of that slows the tempo down.
Answer:
The narrator was deeply impacted about the death of his daughter because he wanted to find a way to bring peace to her death by enacting the policy of killing all the cats and dogs,<em> healthy or infected,</em><em> (since no one really knew which one was infected</em><em>) </em>within the village's vicinity. Somehow, focusing on this extreme measure made him comfortable at the thought that <u>no father or mother would experience having his son or daughter killed by an animal in the future.</u>
Explanation:
The question is related to the story entitled "The Red Bow," written by <em>George Saunders</em>.
It tells a story about a family whose daughter was killed by dogs. In order to ensure that the village would be safe from infected dogs who'd do the same incident in the future, they enacted a policy that all cats and dogs will be killed in the area with the help of the <em>"Animal Removal Officers."</em> Objecting the rule would bring about <u>penalties.</u>
Answer:
"Hello Samantha," Trevor excitedly shouted.
"Hi, Trevor," responded Samantha.
"Want to go to the ice cream shop with me later," Trevor inquired energetically.
"No, I have dance practice later," she said in a somber tone, "I might be able to this weekend, though."
"It is official-- this weekend we will go to the ice cream shop," Trevor declared.
The characters then went their separate, both looking forward to the fun that they will have this weekend.
I believe that you should just check your spelling , capitalize some I's and the word January .
You should also give more detail about the Sunday event.
When you say the word conclusion I begin to think about a short paragraph / summary , this means you should bring the reader in , draw my attention to your mint idea.
I really hope that I'm helping you , :)
