You didn’t show the lines. So super sorry I can’t help!
Generic structure.
it consists of;
1.introduction/orientation-it gives the readers background information of the person. Always the first paragraph. It usually contains newsworthy information about about the person.
2. A series of events-the events should be in chronological order.
3.closing-it consists of a conclusion or comment, of the writer. sometimes it tells about the achievements or the contributions of the person.
What culture was it talking about? We would need some more information to be able to help you with this question.
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