Question

Okay yall so i need to know if yall think i should change anything with my speech that i have to give today so plz give your honest opinions please and tell me what you think about it im supposed to be trying to persuade my class with it
Hey yall so some of you know me but for those of you who do not know me my name is skye
The song i feel should be on are class pandemic playlist is keep your head up by andy grammar. My song is upbeat and catchy and not easy to forget about.this song helps to give you motivation.this song helps to show you that life is full of ups and downs and it also shows that you should keep smiling and keep moving forward and not backwards, this song is very right about if you keep moving forward there will be a rainbow, my favorite lyrics from this song that i always seem to remember are The glow that the sun gives Right around sunset
Helps me realize This is just a journeyDrop your worries i love listening to this song when things arent going well and i know you will love it to when you listen because it will always remind you that things will turn out fine in the end but if you decide not to listen to it thats your lose thank you all for allowing me to tell you why you should choose my song.

Answer 1

Answer:

it looks good

Explanation:

just change the "Hey yall so some of you know me but for those of you who do not know me my name is skye" try and put this "Hey I'm (name) and I will be telling you on why we should (then put whatever ur talking about)  

Hope it helps X)

Answer 2

Answer:

it’s pretty chill u don’t have to change anything