3 years ago

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHAT TO CHANGE IN MY STARTING PARAGRAPH PLEASE

1 answer:

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First of all, I think it’s very good but if I were you I would change on how Greg changed his actions, example “Greg goes and fights the robbers being very brave but calm at the same time. He showed on the outside that he was calm but in the inside he was nervous.”

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