-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
Percy smelt burgers and other food.
Explanation:
This is where i got it and it might help you,,
https://quizlet.com/179603596/lighting-theif-chapter-11-14-flash-cards/
You have to select a different filter but I do not think this app has a filter for that, I can help with middle school work if you would like
