Answer:
The best way to revise the sentence is:
D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.
Explanation:
<u>The original sentence is not really defective, it is only missing a piece of information concerning when the car wash will be held. The best way to add it is to include it at the end of the sentence, as is done in letter D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.</u>
Let's take a look at the other options to understand why they are not usable.
Letter A does begin with the subject of the sentence, but interrupts it with extra information, preventing the sentence from being a direct one. It sounds really confusing. Letter B adds the "on Saturday" information at a strange place, also interrupting the direct flow of the sentence. Letter C puts the "on Saturday" information right at the beginning. It's not that this can't be done. But, in this case, a comma should be added after it. Nevertheless, it makes the introduction of the sentence too long, which is not a good thing.
Answer:
When oils (fossil fuels) are burned, they release an extremely large amount of carbon dioxide into our air. Carbon Dioxide is a Greenhouse gas which means it traps heat into our air which can be linked to Global Warming.
When large areas of land are cut down (deforestation) then it means Carbon Dioxide is released into our air which can also get trapped and cause Global Warming because it is a Greenhouse gas.
Another thing - As Carbon Dioxide is a Greenhouse gas - Greenhouse gases can lead to a large amount of respiratory diseases and pollution (smog) in areas where deforestation can happen or where fossil fuels are burned and used.
Explanation:
I hope that helps a little bit!
The tone of the person that is reading it and the background noise
I can’t think of a third one
