The main action a writer takes when proofreading is fixing errors.
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is this question from some kind of story or are you asking randomly
Norman Gortsby didn't have a positive opinion of the general public or himself. His mood matched the dusk or the settling darkness. He saw honest, hardworking people walking past him as 'the defeated'. He made conclusions about the old gentleman sitting next to him without knowing anything about him.
Answer is: I think I, a fancy citizen, has to go!
What do you mean by suspense...
If you right down in the comments I might be able to help