In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
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C.
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After spraining an ankle during a marathon, Jean continued to the finish line since she decided prior to the race that nothing would keep her from finishing.
"There is hope even of your tells you there isn't"
Answer: The increased production needed to support the war effort created additional jobs for those who were unemployed.
Explanation: It was on my test and I got it right, so you should too. :)
Answer:
When Beowulf dies, his followers show up. Wiglaf criticizes them for their cowardice in leaving their king to fight the dragon by himself. Wiglaf tells them that they will not have the treasure, because they have disgraced themselves. They end up building Beowulf his funeral pyre and burying the dragon's hoard with his ashes.
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