Fiction writing appeals to our imagination.
Answer:
Too much information
Explanation:
There are multiple topics covered in this single passage - radios, cell phones, and television. There's no end goal to what this is talking about, it's all over the place. A paragraph should have a coherent and cohesive topic, which this does not.
Reading isn't "reasonably' strong or solid ;)
Answer:
I think A, B, C (first 3). The last 2 dont seem particularly helpful to the diversity problem in my opinion
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