A few years ago I had an English teacher that encouraged "The Oreo Method"; it compares effective constructive criticism to an Oreo cookie.
The filling in the middle was the constructive criticism, but before and after that, you offer positive feedback for the writer.
Pretty self explanatory:
1. Provide one piece of positive feedback first and linger on it for a couple sentences; let them know how important that "thing" is and, in a way, praise them for doing it. This primes them to accept your feedback cause they know how thoroughly you've read and analyzed their work.
2. Offer any and all of the constructive criticism you have; stay subtle and be concise with all your feedback.
3. Offer more positive feedback, as many good things as you can come up with.
By submerging the constructive criticism between positive feedback, you keep their hopes up while still thoroughly conveying weak spots in their work.
I hope this kinda made sense; it's a very self explanatory idea so I had trouble elaborating on it.
Answer:
Explanation:
the creation of a fictional character
The adverb of a sentence is a word that defines a verb. The main verb in this sentence is the word 'includes', so we are looking for the word that defines it, makes it more specific. So let's take a look at our answer choices:
A. includes
We know that includes is the verb of the sentence, so we can nix answer A right away.
B. likely
This word describes the way in which the pictures of planes were included, so this looks like a good candidate.
C. interesting
This word is an adjective defining the pictures, not the verb of the sentence, so we can scratch it off our choices
D. many
This is another adjective defining the amount of pictures there were, so we can also remove choice D from our list.
And we're left with answer choice B.
The word 'likely' is the adverb in the sentence.
Hope that helped! =)
