<span>Mr. Foss showed more pride in being a manager than in being a father.
Here, the paralellism is simply "in", which needs to be repeated.</span>
You need to check each sentence for errors. If there's an extra letter, such as the "s" in "reads" (#1) you need to use the symbol which deletes a letter. If a sentence/word is missing a word/letter... you need to use a symbol to show that a word/letter should be shown there.
Is this suppose to be a book and if it is what is it called and then i will help you
Parallelism because you use the same structures over and over
