the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom
Explanation:
mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.
To Indian tribes, the presence of an infant meant that they were a peaceful party. So, if Lewis, Clark, and mother Indian were to have stopped at any tribes, the tribe would know that they were not a war party.
I believe it connotation but if i’m wrong i’m sorry
