Answer:
Its looks fine as is, I would just change it to "Oh yea." Josh says, ect.
Or you could say "oh yea." Josh says, "I forgot to mention that throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know." Put something here about what 'Josh' is doing (he looks at you, he looks away, ect.) "You better get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."
Explanation:
The first one. It shows a collective group following a trend and implying that the reader should follow suit.<span>“America has fallen in love with Morning Bran Cereal. Isn’t it time you fall in love too?</span>
the boy in the stripped pjs its a good book
First of all befor and it needs a comma capitalize W and put a period after P
