(Aim for using at least two solid pieces of evidence per paragraph.) Then, wrap up the Body Paragraph with a mini-concluding sentence that sums up only what you have discussed in this paragraph and how it relates to your thesis.
Try writing everything out by introduction paragraph, paragraph 1,2,3 etc; and your conclusion paragraph so you can separate your thoughts and make most of what you plan to write more organized and neat.
his father use to love books and he use to buy a lot of them, and because his father loved books, and the 1st person speaker started to love books as well.
