If you're writing a personal narrative essay, you might want to follow these tips:
- Stick with the main plot of your story
- Add examples and descriptions if possible
- Don't leave out your emotions
- Make it useful; give tips in conclusion
- Make sure it's in a narrative tone
Say if you wanted to write about, "The Time When My First Tooth Fell Out", and decided to stick with it, you may want to start with a scene that the reader can imagine. Or, you may want to start off in a "sophisticated" way. And by that I mean, starting off with such words like: Even though, Just because, and Forth and for most. But, I'll give you an example of a simple way to start of your introductory paragraph.
Example: It was mid-summer, July 23, 2010, and I was more than ready to enjoy my summer with my friends. Julie, my friend since we were in diapers, was having a summer bash in her backyard that day. I was ecstatic! My first summer party as a big kid! I had to get ready within an hour, fix my hair, get my bathing suit, and make sure I had sunscreen. I'm scrambling trying to get things done before we leave, clothes on the floor scattered like wild rats. I'm running faster and faster as every moment passes, then, I fall, hard enough to cause the tectonic plates to shift. My mom rushes in to see if I'm okay, and what the raucous was about. She looked at my face, and her eyes widened as if she saw a ghost. I asked her what was wrong, and she looked at me surprised. I touched my face as she still had the horrified look on hers. I remove my hand from my mouth to later see blood on my palm. I lick around my mouth to only feel a gap where my canine tooth used to be three minutes ago. My mom says, "Oh honey, you lost your first baby teeth." I wasn't so thrilled as she was, I had a summer bash to go to in twenty minutes! And I didn't want my friends to see my missing tooth and laugh at me. So, I hid in my room and told my mom I didn't want to go anymore. She told me it was nonsense and said they'd think I'm cool. I didn't believe her for a moment, but, sooner or later, I did, and decided to go regardless of my missing tooth.
That's a short little narrative you can go by and tweak if you want to use it. Or to make it more relatable to your life story, add some things.
I hope I helped :)
Answer:
I think the answer is A.
Explanation:
Choice B is wrong because the paragraph is not based on snakes eating other animals.
Choice C is wrong because they are not only talking about snake's venom used for medicine.
Choice D is wrong because it is not only talking about poisonous snakes.
I hope this is correct.
Everybody feels freedom in his own way and everybody has own opinion of what is the freedom. Unfortunately now in our <span>society we have very primitive <span>values. Most of the people want to have expensive gadgets, clothes, cars and so on. And children do the same: they want to have all the toys they see on a TV screen and sometimes feel rage if they don't get what they want. So maybe children feel freedom when they have all they want and when they are not forced to do what they don't want to do.</span></span>
Przepraszam ale nie wiem jaką książkę czytasz... no i nie piszę całego eseju...
