Assuming first draft mean rough draft??
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What's the dialogue? if you give me the conversation I'll come back and answer your question
Training your dog.
It is very important to train your dog. It keeps your dog's mind active, and it >help(s)< to build an understanding between you and your dog. Often owners will shout at their dogs or even punish them ,when what is needed is training.
There is an error with sentence 2 , and you would change help to helps
should be adjective clause
