I also say its to neaten up forgive me if its wrong
I don't know what your choices are but the dictionary definition of "Elude" is: evade or escape from, typically in a skillful or cunning way. Hope that helps!
His satire is aimed at the "hypocrisy" of making an adventure appear more glorious than it was. He is trying to say that there is nothing glorious about war, there is only death and suffering, and it is definitely not a pretty sight.
For a more intruiging writing, more interesting for the reader. it creates a better more imaginitive picture for the reader
What about it? U didn’t add a ?
