I think it’s deceptive but my English is really bad
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Answer: I feel that in our generation there will be new inventions and much more modern day technology. I can imagine closets that will have ready made outfits for you as you are waking up. Our century has grown so much and I can imagine people not getting out of their houses because of it. Technology has both a negative and positive side. Positive because it helps us to do less work, and negative because... is doing less work really worth putting our physical health, mental well being and social skills at risk? It’s both harder and easier to make friends and actually be in a good state of mind if you’re using technology too much or watching a screen 24/7. I forsee that the future for my generation will become lazy and less active, which is negative in my eyes.
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Answer:
Our lives are but clouds wandering across a sky
Like clouds our lives are full of wandering thoughts
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