“In” is the problem
Reason
The In means it is inside November. We use “on” instead of “in”
You should observe and pay attention to the way they talk, behave when they are alone, and when they are in somebody's company. Observe what they do, what they like and dislike. Just like figuring out a real person - you should think the character is a real person, and consider how you would figure out somebody in your own life, who is not fictional.
