Question

Is my story good? I wrote it for school Any suggestions?

Answer 1

Answer: I think it’s good really

Explanation:

Answer 2

Maybe provide a little more context! No big rewrites or anything, maybe just why they were qualified to be at such a “top secret meeting.” Maybe they’re AP students researching possible vaccines for a school project & a scientist noticed their progress and decided to give them some first hand experience. And maybe add a few details to make it more colorful, like adjectives or interesting verbs.