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it sounds fine to me, but I think it would be better as"I should've never changed the color of my braces to orange." But either work I'm pretty sure
One day at school I was playing with my friends on the soccer field. It was lunch time, so it was very hot and the sun was very hot so there were few of us who went out to the patio.
We head to the goal nets to capture the little shade. There was a little bird that had fallen from somewhere. We took it and took it inside the school to raise it but in the sky there was a bird flying overhead, maybe it was the mother of the baby.
So we decided to launch it so that it would take flight but it just pushed off and fell.
The bird died from the impact and the mother pecked us, we ran inside.
The teacher had observed everything and punished us for interfering in nature, because if we had left the abe in its place, the mother would have picked it up.
Robin brought Magna Carta to Sherwood Forest.
The spoon was her secret, when I stirred it below the rough milky surface that was her mind; a fortress my curiosity and desire could not penetrate.
He flew down the stairs, because he was the spirit of this morning, the wind that brought the rain, and he was the spring; the spring that melted the ice of yesterday’s storm. What kid wouldn’t be? It was Christmas morning.
She was a tigress, eyeing her opponents with a quiet fierceness. She could win this chess tournament, if her moves were thunder on the table, her reflexes lightning in the air, her strategy a midnight flood; you don’t know you’re doomed until it’s too late.
