Question

Help me please, what's wrong with this introduction?

Answer 1

Answer:

you have to explain why hoodies are safe.

Explanation:

for example, hoodies are not safe because when walking in school with a hoodie, teachers might not be able to recognize the person or walking with a hoodie over your head can make you bump into people by not seeing them.

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Answer 2

Answer:

You have to state your reasons why you think people should not be wearing hoodies

Explanation:

For example one reason could be because if someone walks into a school with a hoodie on most people would not know who it is so it will not be safe.

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