Based from the paragraph, the sentence that Fatima's teacher will most likely ask her to revise is:
Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter.
Hope my answer has come to satisfy your query.
ANSWER
A. Their
EXPLANATION: The club is owned/belongs to Haitian
The answer is b. there should be a period mark after escape. EX: Movies are a great escape. I go to the cinema often.
