Your thesis statement is a bit wordy. Omit the phrase "and other problems." Change the wording in the latter half of your thesis, as it makes it sound like you are trying to regulate the consequences, not the thing itself. You should also list the consequences. Here's an example of a thesis statement that would sound better (corrections are in bold):
Advancements in genetic engineering such as designer babies have impacted people's lives by getting rid of genetic diseases<u>;</u> however, these advancements should be regulated because of their many consequences, including [consequences here].
Answer: B: earths magnetic field protects it from all types of space weather
The correct answer is “The authors include details about the changes in diets over time to inform readers about how sugar has transformed what we eat.” Although there is a hidden subtext that indicates that modern diets are indeed unhealthy because of the excessive intake of sugar, the author’s main concern is to illustrate above all the economic importance of sugar and how it affects other unrelated issues. It also provides hints as to what such importance means for nutrition, social justice and economic justice. The author does that by enumerating the historical facts about the indirect and direct effects of sugar on the lives of people (poor factory workers, slaves), the effect on the economy (the wealth they gained, the trade connections they made, and the banking systems they developed in the slave and sugar trade), the effect on culinary practices (jams, cakes, syrups, and tea) and finally its effects on human health (Americans eat an average of 140 pounds every year).
I believe that as a child he was wounded by the tusk of a wild boar when he was out hunting with some relatives (grandfather and uncle), and that wound left a scar on him.
