This would be a (dangling modifier) because a dangling cause is a group of words where they do not clearly state what words or word it states.
Study the crafts, write things shorter than a book, plug yourself into a community of writers, create a writing schedule and stick with it. They are so many ways to become an author, do more research it might help you out .
I believe the word horror would insert
the feeling of fear except disgust in this sentence.
The word “abomination” is defined as
the thing that causes loathing, disgust or the feeling of hatred. If the word
abomination would be replaced with the word horror in this sentence it would
insert the feeling of fear as the word horror represents the intense feeling of
fear, shock, or disgust.
I can’t do it if there is no text provided the E stands for evidence
I would Raye it 8.5, I would say it's a good book, it's written simply nothing compel but the style is really good there is so much development and chaos of a single character, it taught alot about self knowledge and dystopian society and how it can be very evil no spoilers but the main character wants true happiness and that's why he keeps going against societies ideas. You won't regret reading the book.