I'm writing a story and I want your peoples thoughts on it and do you have any ideas for what will come next? the thing at the b

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3 years ago

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ottom is my basic plan for the story but I dunno how to lead up to it.
Also hewo Jordan person :D

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Inessa [10] · Answer 1 · 2022-08-29T14:09:27+03:00

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I actually quite like the story, and so I must say not blatantly there are a few places you need some commas and one short run on entence

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