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ahrayia [7]
3 years ago
12

Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?

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2 answers:
hoa [83]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

B. I did the test on A p e x

Explanation:

Vinil7 [7]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

B.

Explanation:

B is the correct answer, as it drastically shortens the paragraph without changing the facts within them.

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