I would like to help but you would have to include paragraph 6 In order to answer the question
A)Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.
Option A has the correct revision for a formal email. It states the topic without using any informal tone or voice. Option B is informal because of the introductory phrase "you now" and the vagueness of the observation "it's gross." Option C is informal due to the words "awesome" and "gross". Option D is informal because of the use of the word "obviously" and "smart".
Answer:
Nevertheless, I think there needs to be more lighting in the parking lot
Hooks is not needed in a body paragraph. It is only required in your introductory paragraph to make the reader want to read your writing piece in the first place.
