If the email will be read in a mobile device then I would keep it very short, so that it can be desplayed on one screen, without scrolling. How about this then:
Dear Supervisor,
I just wanted to update you on my training. This week, we have practiced on pacients, and specifically, we practiced explaining to patients the procedures, exchanging stitches and cleaning the wounds. I believe that this is very important experience for my career!
All the best,
your trainee
Answer:
I don't think the paragraph catches attention.
Explanation:
The paragraph appears to be a persuasive text, and to make your text successful in changing others' mindsets, it needs to be appealing enough for the readers to go through all the way. It does follow TBEAR elements, but it is too dull to change anything. To make it worthy of readers' attention, you have to keep evidence short. Ignore the parts of the evidence that is not necessary.
<em>If I got it wrong, I will return the points to you through another question. Have a good day! :)</em>
You should summarize the most important parts of the book like theme, symbols, and anything else that is a main contribution to the plot. Also, write about your interpretation of the book and what it's message meant in your mind.
Read the excerpt from "A Modest Proposal."
Those who are more thrifty (as I must confess the times require) may flea the carcass; the skin of which, artificially dressed, will make admirable gloves for ladies, and summer boots for fine gentlemen.
The author is using satire in this excerpt to emphasize the
A. utter absurdity of his plan.
B. necessity for warm winter clothing.
C. ways that people are cruel to children.
D. various benefits of his plan.
Answer:
A. utter absurdity of his plan.
Explanation:
From the book"A Modest Proposal", the writer is using satire to show how utterly absurd the idea of selling of one's children to be eaten as a solution to the extreme hunger in Ireland.
The author uses satire to show how absurd it is to sell off one's children because of poverty.
