<u>Original sentences:</u> José received a college scholarship for baseball from Vanderbilt University. He has been playing for years. He will attend this fall.
<u>Correct</u><u> </u><u>combination</u><u>:</u> Playing for years, Jose who will be attending this fall, received a college scholarship from Vanderbilt University.
<u>Reasoning</u>
1. <em>since</em><em> </em>and <em>for</em><em> </em>cannot be used together for time depiction.
2. "..and attending this fall" seems incomplete due to incorrect use of tense.
<em>Hope</em><em> </em><em>this</em><em> </em><em>helps</em><em> </em><em>:</em><em>)</em>
Maybe compare and contrast online schooling to regular schooling, then lead into the idea that online schooling provides you with many more resources than just a teacher could, plus it allows for a different learning style. Then conclude with your main point and maybe one fact about it
False! Hope this helps!! Good Luck!!
Answer:
The underlined words are;
1. Ancestors- direct object
2. Homes- direct object
3. Children- Indirect object
4. Relatives- Indirect object
Explanation:
The direct object is the noun that receives the action performed by the verb. It answers the question of who or what. In the first question, if we ask the question, "Who do the Chinese honor?" The answer will be, "their ancestors". For the second question, if we also ask what families do to keep away bad luck, the answer will be to clean their homes. ]
An indirect object receives the action performed by the direct object. The action is performed to or for the indirect object. Who do people give red envelopes filled with money? Answer: to the children. Who do families wish fortune, health, and happiness? Answer: to their relatives.
It looks really good but I think you should put a comma before ( like ) and I suggest to take the ( grave or ) part because it will sound a lot more better
