The participial or infinitive phrase in each sentence are in bold
Julia withdrew money from each paycheck to renovate her old and dingy bathroom.
Humming to himself, he appeared in good spirits as he walked to the office.
Audience members, bored by the dull guest speaker, quickly lost their interest in the presentation.
To become an expert archer, Natasha dedicated long days to repetitive target drills.
The movie featured an unknown actress described as a rising star.
To gain admittance to Yale University was Nicholas's top priority.
Tonight's gala event is an effort to help raise money for natural-disaster relief.
her bestselling series goes by the name the mortal instruments.
the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom
Explanation:
mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.
Tone is created by diction and syntax.
