Using vivid words in a poetry or fiction is to create a mental image
Her eyes darker than the night it self and her voice is like the soft wind during an eclipse.
When my head rest of her chest my mind just goes away and my problems are not the big monster that they always are. She is my peaceful rest.
She looks over me like the moon that never stop following me does. She looks at me like im her most precious possession.
While i look at her like she is my endless night sky.
I hope this helps