In the Odyssey, the traits that Odysseus has that allow him to triumph in the bow and arrow challenge that Penelope sets for her suitors are his archery skills and intelligence.
Odysseus has always been known as an excellent archer, which is exactly why Penelope had this type of competition in the first place. It was quite easy for him to be better than the remaining competitors due to his skills and his brains.
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I would love to see more descriptive words! Phrases such as, "I was so hungry that I swear I started digesting myself" may be helpful, as you want to keep your reader captivated! Instead of including the lyrics of the song, I suggest just stating that he sang the entire song, as this takes up valuable space. Instead of describing the song, try describing what the narrator feels. Perhaps her heart is "fluttering with joy," and his hair is "swaying like a dove's feathers in flight". Otherwise, I enjoyed this excerpt!
